English Writing Practice

[EWP] 정규회화과정 Level 7-8 : Unit 26. I’m So Embarrassed. STEP 4. 1:1 글쓰기

anothel 2021. 10. 11.

Today’s Topic

When was the last time you were really embarrassed? What happened? How did you eliminate the embarrassment?

 

Writing / 정필규 2021. 10. 11


As you know, because of pandemic the world is panic nowadays. The government publish that how many people affected corona virus every day for a wake up call for people. Fortunately, I got the first corona 19 pfizer vaccine about a month ago and I got the second vaccine a few days ago. So, I am not related with corona virus infection anymore. I don't have to worry about the infection. By the way, I had a wired situation before I got the second vaccine. I have been preparing for wedding. I was searching for home appliances at lots of places. Department store, Road shop, etc. Because I am not familiar with calculating money and selecting what kinds of appliances, that trip made me be tired. That's why I and My girl friend feels like getting cold. So, We considered corona virus test, of course, together. Even if the test station which is drive through was started at 9 a.m., there were so many waiting people for the test. We should wait too long. At this point, a car cut in line forward my car. I was really embarrassed but I can not do anything without horn blowing.

 

Revised Writing


As you know, because of (the) pandemic(,) the world is (in) panic nowadays. The government publish that how many(announces the number of) people affected corona virus(by the coronavirus) every day for(as) a wake up(wake-up) call for people. Fortunately, I got the first corona 19 pfizer(my first COVID-19 Pfizer) vaccine about a month ago(,) and I got the second vaccine a few days ago. So,(So) I am not related with corona virus(that concerned with the coronavirus) infection anymore. I don't have to worry about the infection. By the way, I had a wired(weird) situation before I got the second vaccine. I have been preparing for (my) wedding. I was searching for home appliances at lots of places. Department store, Road shop,(places: department stores, road shops,) etc. Because I am not familiar with calculating money and selecting what kinds of appliances, that trip made me be(x) tired. That's why I and My girl friend feels(my girlfriend felt) like getting (a) cold. So, We(So we) considered corona virus(getting a coronavirus) test, of course, together. Even if the test station(,) which is(was a) drive through was started(drive-through, opened) at 9 a.m., there were so many waiting people for the test. We should(had to) wait (for) too long. At this point, a car cut in line forward(in front of) my car. I was really embarrassed(,) but I can(could) not do anything without horn blowing.(aside from blowing my horn.)

 

Re-Writing / 정필규


As you know, because of the pandemic, the world is in panic nowadays. The government announces the number of people affected by the coronavirus everyday as a wake-up call for people. Fortunately, I got my first COVID-19 Pfizer vaccine about a month ago, and I got the second vaccine a few days ago. So I am not that concerned with the coronavirus infection anymore. I don't have to worry about the infection. By the way, I had a weird situation before I got the second vaccine. I have been preparing for my wedding. I was searching for home appliances at lots of places: department stores, road shops, etc. Because I am not familiar with calculating money and selecting what kinds of appliances, that trip made me tired. That's why I and my girlfriend felt like getting a cold. So we considered getting a coronavirus test, of course, together. Even if the test station which was a drive-through, opened at 9 a.m., there were so many waiting people for the test. We had to wait for too long. At this point, a car cut in line in front of my car. I was really embarrassed, but I could not do anything aside from blowing my horn.

 

문법 & 문장 교정

  • Person A and B met before.
    • BETTER Person A and B have met before.
  • I should have prepare this class.
    • BETTER I should have prepare for this class.
  • It makes me feel better.
    • BETTER I feel good. (SIMILAR)

 

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